I wrote this list in my journal a few days ago, and hope it will help me as I write my narrative timeline (autobiography a la Julia Cameron’s book, A Vein of Gold.)

My list of 49 places where I’ve lived:

1) The little white house on Willet’s Drive in San Pablo - it has since been torn down. Age 0 to 2/3?
2) Mira Vista Drive, El Cerrito - age 2/3 to 8.
3) 3314 Morningside Drive, El Sobrante/Richmond - age 8 to 18 except for the times I wasn’t there.
4) My grandmother’s home in San Leandro, and my uncle’s home in Hayward - stayed there for four or five months when I was fifteen.
5) My friend Leslie’s home on Bayview Court in El Sobrante - I stayed there four or five months when I was sixteen.
6) My friend Susan’s home on Gold Court in El Sobrante - I stayed there four or five months when I was seventeen. All these were places I went for refuge because I couldn’t get along with my mother. Every year I left in about September/October and didn’t return until after the first of the following year.
7) A house on 17th Avenue in the Richmond District. I can’t remember what age I was when I lived there, with friends. Stayed about four or five months. One of those very foggy memories.
8 ) A flat on California Street in Santa Cruz - I always thought of this as the first place I moved to when I left home at 18, but it couldn’t have been because I lived in the Richmond District before that. I stayed only a couple months in Santa Cruz though it is one of the best towns I’ve ever lived in.
9) A room in a flat on Baker Street in San Francisco. A month or two.
10) A room in a flat on Noe Street in San Francisco - stayed there a few months then went on my Grand Canyon adventure in January 1972. I remember this date by the date of the total eclipse of the moon that I saw while there. I was 19 at the time.
11) 1649 Page Street in the Haight Ashbury. I lived there for 4 or 5 months.
12) A room in an apartment on Upper Ashbury. That lasted only about a month, if that. The woman we moved in with kept flirting with my boyfriend which annoyed me terribly!
13) A room in a flat on (I think) 26th near Guerrero in San Francisco. Lived there possibly six months.
14) An apartment upstairs from that room. I lived there a few months in 1973 and was there when my first child was born on April 24, 1973.
15) A house just outside of Vista, southern California, where I lived a few months with my son’s father. It was on a property called Palm Hill Ranch.
16) An apartment across the street from the old Levi Strauss factory ruins in San Francisco, around the corner from Valencia. (Can’t remember the street name just now.) We sub-letted the place for a few months.
17) A flat at 444 Virginia St. on Potrero Hill, San Francisco. Lived there a few months in 1973, then felt the need to leave my son’s father.
18 ) Back to my mother’s home for a month or so. I’m re-counting this place because so much time went by before I moved back there.
19) An apartment on Tenth Avenue in Redding, CA. - 1974.
20) A tiny hotel room in Redding. It was too small and I moved out after a month.
21) A cottage on Shasta Street in Redding - 1974-5.
22) A house on Shasta Street in Redding - 1976-7.
23) Mary Anne Risley’s home in Modesto - stayed for a month or two in 1977.
24) The horrible Mesa Verde Apartments in Modesto. Stayed there for a few months in 1977-8.
25) A duplex on Evergreen Road in Modesto. 1978.
26) Sister-in-law Terry’s house on 6th St. in Merced. 1978-1979.
27) An apartment in Merced - a couple months.
28 ) A house on Franklin Street in Merced. - 1980-81.
29) An apartment in Tuolumne City, near Sonora. 1981.
30) A house in Tuolumne City. 1981-2.
31) 717 Denair Street in Tulare, CA.
32) Trailer #1 - a 17’ travel trailer in the trailer court across from the fairgrounds in Tulare.
33) Trailer #2 - a 40’ 1957 park model trailer in the same trailer court.
34) Same trailer - moved it to a trailer park in the countryside near Kerman, CA. 1983 or 1984.
35) A grouphome where my husband worked near Fresno, for a couple months.
36) Homeless in the Bay Area for a few months, as my trailer was rented out.
37) Back to the Kerman trailer park. 1985-6.
38 ) An apartment in Reedley, CA. 1986.
39) 334 Crenshaw Road, Visalia, a condo. 1986-1988.
40) An old house on G St. in Visalia. 1988.
41) An apartment on Caldwell in Visalia. 1988-9.
42) An apartment near Demaree in Visalia. 1989.
43) Another apartment in the same complex.
44) An apartment near the freeway in Tulare, 1990. The absolute worst place I’ve ever lived because the freeway sound was constant.
45) A house in Tulare. Three years, from 1990-1993.
46) A flat in North Oakland. Nearly three years. 1993-1995.
47) A duplex in Pittsburg CA at the corner of 17th and Davi, 1995-1999. Five years.
48 ) The hotel in Dunsmuir. A month from 1999-2000.
49) A cabin/house in the woods near Happy Camp, January 11, 2000 until now.

Maggie Stiefvater is an urban fantasy novelist who is sponsoring a contest to promote her new novel, Shiver. Contest details are on Maggie Stiefvater’s blog.Shiver will be released this summer on August 1.

(Congratulations, Maggie! I know you’re excited!)

Here’s the official blurb about the new book:

“For years, Grace has watched the wolves in the woods behind her house. One yellow-eyed wolf–her wolf–is a chilling presence she can’t seem to live without. Meanwhile, Sam has lived two lives: In winter, the frozen woods, the protection of the pack, and the silent company of a fearless girl. In summer, a few precious months of being human . . . until the cold makes him shift back again.

Now, Grace meets a yellow-eyed boy whose familiarity takes her breath away. It’s her wolf. It has to be. But as winter nears, Sam must fight to stay human–or risk losing himself, and Grace, forever.”

You can pre-order Shiver now through Amazon.

To learn more about Maggie’s current contest see Crazy People! There are better ways to get ARCs. She’s offering ARC copies of Shiver and Lament (another novel she wrote,) and critiques.

Sounds good! I’m posting this in the hope my friend Kai Strand can win the contest! Go Kai!

Not all authors understand teenagers, but Beverly Stowe McClure does. She has an innate understanding of the teenage mindset, perhaps because she was a teacher for many years. Her recently published novel, Rebel in Blue Jeans, transcends the mundane to embrace the emotions of a vibrantly opinionated and stubborn teenage girl whose mother has abandoned her.

Though her mother left the family home to live with a drummer, a man who Rebel never met, life on the ranch continues with Rebel’s grieving, workaholic father doing little to quell her wild nature or heal her aching heart. Left to mend in her own way, Rebel gives her time and compassion to her horses and some injured animals she’s collected in a makeshift hospital in the barn.

Rebel isn’t alone for long because her overly friendly neighbors, Will and Sully, won’t stand for it. There’s no time for moping - they want to take her places constantly. There’s a bit of romantic tension as Rebel chooses to date a college boy. Will and Sully are distressed by that and try to protect Rebel from her own willfulness.

The book reaches out to readers who learn to love Rebel  for her compassion toward animals while they sympathize with the shock she endures when her mother leaves. You’ll find this young adult novel to be full of excitement, tension, emotions, and even a bit of sillyness. The book ends too soon because once we let Rebel into our lives, it is hard to let go.

If you attended the Muse Online Writers Conference last October, you may remember the author, Beverly Stowe McClure. She presented a workshop for children’s writers. She has a website for this book: Diary of a Rebel.

More articles about this book:

Rebel in Blue Jeans: Meet Will and Sully! by Donna M. McDine, children’s author
Rebel in Blue Jeans: A Short Interview With Author Beverly Stowe McClure by The Book Muncher
Rebel in Blue Jeans by Beverly Stowe McClure by Tracee
Rebel in Blue Jeans: Author Beverly Stowe McClure’s Guest Post by Morgan Mandel at ACME Authors Link
Rebel in Blue Jeans: Meet Rebel Ferguson by Cheryl C. Malandrinos
Rebel in Blue Jeans - Beverly Stowe McClure by Tristi Pinkston, historical fiction author

This is a review of one of the books I’ve read for The Newbery Project. - LJM

I loved reading I, Juan de Pareja by Elizabeth Borton de Trevino. This book, written in the first-person point of view, won the Newbery Medal in 1966.

The novel is based on the real life story of Juan de Pareja, a slave that served a famous painter, Diego Rodríguez de Silva y Velázquez, in 17th century Spain. The main character is compelling and likable. We meet him as a child living in Seville. Since the book is written in first-person, from Juan de Pareja’s point of view, we get to know him well; he confides his deepest secrets and feelings as he passes through a difficult childhood.

After the first few chapters, Juan de Pareja is no longer a child. To me it seemed strange to read a children’s book that violated a primary rule of writing for children – that the main character should be a child – and that’s one reason I decided the book was more suitable for teenagers than for middle grade aged children (8 to 12). Another reason is that there are many tragic deaths of people around him, including his mother and a young girl. Through most of the book, we read about Juan de Pareja as an adult, living in Madrid, a slave to the painter. He is portrayed as a devoted servant who is happy with his slavery except for one detail: he wants to paint, which is forbidden by law to slaves.

The writing in this book flowed flawlessly so it was pleasant to read, and it took me only a few days to get through it. That’s fast, as I’m normally a slow reader who gets through one chapter per night if I’m lucky. But I, Juan de Pareja fascinated me and at times I couldn’t put it down despite being tired (I read right before sleeping, most nights).

One thing I liked about the book was the philosophy Velasquez expressed about painting. In one scene he compared the drawings of two apprentice artists, defacing the excellent work of one of the boys because he had embellished the truth in order to make a still-life of moldy cheese and dry bread look better. Velasquez said, “I would rather paint exactly what I see, even if it is ugly, perfectly, than indifferently paint something superficially lovely. . . . Art is Truth, and to serve Art, I will never deceive.”

You can find photos of paintings by Velazquez on the internet. The painting included with this review is one Velasquez did in 1650 of his slave and friend, Juan de Pareja.

This year I’m participating in The Newbery Project, a group collaboration blog with book reviews by people who have agreed to read all the Newbery Medal winning books. The Newbery Medal is awarded annually by the American Library Association (ALA) for the most distinguished contribution to children’s literature, the prior year.

I decided to do this because I’ve had the goal of reading all those books for a long time. It started about ten years ago when I started reading children’s novels out loud to my young children while I was homeschooling them. We developed a habit of reading Newbery Medal winning books, and Newbery honor books, together as a family. So I’ve already read many of the titles on the list. I, however, included the Newbery honor books rather than only the Newbery Medal winners, so there’s still a lot of winners I haven’t read yet. I plan to re-read books I’ve read before, to prepare to review them for the site. I’m also posting reviews on this site for each novel.

After reading many of these fine novels, I set my heart on writing some, and that came to pass starting in 2001. I’ve now written three middle grade novels and two young adult novels. Because I’m writing in this genre, I need to read the type of books I’m working on. So The Newbery Project serves a real need for me, as well as being something that fulfills a goal I set for myself years ago.

So far I’ve reviewed only three novels for the list. I have one more review in the works, and am currently listening to another Newbery Medal winning novel, on tape.

This is a review of one of the books I’ve read for The Newbery Project. - LJM

The 1943 winner of the Newbery Medal, Adam of the Road, a 23-chapter book by Elizabeth Janet Gray (Elizabeth Gray Vining), is a juvenile romp down primitive roads surrounding London during the Middle Age years of 1294-1295. The title character, Adam Quartermayne, is the eleven-year-old son of a minstrel. Adam starts his adventure with a harp, and ends it with a bagpipe. He also has a steady repertoire of songs, including at least one he wrote himself. And Adam has the road.

According to Adam’s father, Roger, the road is home to a minstrel:

“A road is a kind of holy thing,” Roger went on. “That’s why it’s a good work to keep a road in repair, like giving alms to the poor or tending the sick. It’s open to the sun and wind and rain. It brings all kinds of people and all parts of England together. And it’s home to a minstrel, even though he may happen to be sleeping in a castle.”

-Adam of the Road by Elizabeth Janet Gray, Viking Press paperback, page 53

I found this particularly interesting because my first big writing project, my seventh grade term paper, was about minstrels. I wish I’d known about this novel back then.

There’s some beautiful description in this book:

“Between the high, windswept fields the road stretched muddy and rutted toward bare purple woods. Here and there a swollen brook flooding the road reflected the cold cherry-colored light of the setting sun.”

-Adam of the Road by Elizabeth Janet Gray, Viking Press paperback, page 292

The book contains plenty of action to keep a child interested as Adam leaves his school to follow his father down the road to harmonious minstrelsy. His adorable red setter, Nick, goes along.

Things happen in a fairly ordinary way until page 126 when Adam’s dog, Nick, is kidnapped. I wondered if this might have been a better beginning for the story, since at this point the story grabs the heart and emotions and won’t let go. As if that wasn’t bad enough, Adam soon loses track of his father as well. You just have to keep reading to find out what happens next!

Adam’s story is one of suffering and hardship. On the road he meets wonderful people who want to help him as well as evil people who want only to harm and destroy. The contrast of Adam’s experience with the lives of children in modern times is going to be an eye-opener for every child who reads this moving novel. Despite all conflict, Adam maintains a sense of gratitude for the experiences life gives him:

“Last night at Guildford Castle, the night before at the Ferryman’s house, tonight at Farnham Inn under the merchant’s care! Adam thought he knew now why Roger said the road was home to the minstrel. It was because people were kind.”

-Adam of the Road by Elizabeth Janet Gray, Viking Press paperback, page166

Some of those people were so kind they tried to convert Adam to their styles of living. He was offered opportunities in several different trades, but it was minstrelsy he had his heart set on.

I found a lot of dated expressions in this book. How quickly our language changes! I won’t ruin the experience for you by pointing them all out, but expect a 1940s book, because that’s what you’re going to get when you read Adam of the Road. Quaint in places, but still an excellent children’s primer on the life of minstrels in the Middle Ages in England.

This is a review of one of the books I’ve read for The Newbery Project. You can find more information about this book at Secret of the Andes on Squidoo.- LJM

When a writer reads a book, any flaws will stand out because we’re so used to editing our own work. Secret of the Andes, a Newbery Medal winning novel (1953) was fairly well edited - yet I found a few quirks to trip up my reading.

Let’s cover the good parts first.

Like many Newbery award winning books, Secret of the Andes provides children with a pleasant way to learn about a foreign culture. The author, Ann Nolan Clark, traveled through Peru and other Central and South American countries on a grant from 1945 to 1950. She’d already written and had published fifteen children’s novels about Native American culture. That was done during her twenty-five years of teaching at a New Mexico school for native children. From her travels, she was inspired to write a few more novels. Secret of the Andes was one of them.

In Secret of the Andes Ann Nolan Clark shared her extensive knowledge of Peruvian Inca culture. The protagonist in this unusual coming of age middle grade novel is a young Inca boy, Cusi, who has lived his entire life in a hidden valley on a mountain, high in the Andes. His guardian, Chuto, is a llama herder and breeder.

“The boy had seen no people in the eight years he had lived here. He had been too young to remember what had gone before.” - pg. 2

They shear the llamas annually and Chuto takes the wool to the city to barter for supplies. At the beginning of the novel Cusi has never been away from his flock of llamas in the hidden valley, but during the course of the book he meets other people for the first time in his life, and makes two trips down the mountain to visit the civilization below.

Throughout the novel Cusi yearns to know who his parents were and how he came to be living on a mountain with Chuto. He wants to live with a family, and when he sees that a family moved into a valley visible to him over the side of a cliff, he spends a lot of time looking at them to see what they do together.

To her credit, author Ann Nolan Clark pulls together all these feelings and provides answers for Cusi by the end of the novel. She does so, however, using some magical thinking techniques that made me cringe. For example, Cusi’s black llama and best friend, Misti, leads him on several excursions which include important plot points. I had a hard time believing that the llama was that perceptive and intelligent. I would have liked it better if Cusi stumbled upon these places himself, pulling the llama behind him. Clark also capitalized on the view that the Inca culture is mysterious by providing mysterious powers to the Incas. It seemed they knew things nobody else did, in ways nobody else could. What was otherwise a fairly believable novel took some leaps that were uncomfortable for me.

However the final chapter was very satisfying - enough so that I was able to forgive the rest. Ann Nolan Clark finished by showing Cusi the secret Chuto had kept from him for so many years. By that point in the novel I was able to believe that Cusi’s purpose for being on the mountain was worthwhile.

I enjoyed Ann Nolan Clark’s imagery and descriptions, for example:

“They lived in a hidden valley high up on the rock slope of a mountain. Mountain peak upon mountain peak, sheer and hard and glistening in frozen mantles of ice and snow, encircled them.” - pg. 2

What I didn’t enjoy was her occasional insertions of cultural notes that didn’t seem to fit the story line:

“Chuto brought the yarn he had carried down the mountain to barter. While they ate parched corn and dried meat, Chuto bargained. The other men examined the yarn, noting its quality and the evenness of its spinning. ‘The women of your village spin good yarn,’ one man told him. Chuto did not answer. He did not say there were no women in his village. He did not say that he had spun the yarn and under his patient teaching Cusi had spun some of it. Although spinning is chiefly women’s work, men and boys know how to spin. Occasionally they can be seen spinning yarn as they walk along the highland trails.” - pg. 46

This scene is fine until the last two sentences, which should have been consigned to the author’s notes. Having written novels, I can see why they were included in the first draft, but I think they should have been edited out in subsequent drafts. However Ann Nolan Clark was a teacher - something I sensed through reading Secret of the Andes, before I researched for biographical information. She was not just telling a good story; she had an ulterior motive, to bring an ancient native culture to life.

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Page numbers are from the contemporary Puffin Books paperback edition.

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I wrote a separate review of this book for The Newbery Project. Here’s a direct link to my review there: Newbery Project: Secret of the Andes (1953).

Blogging is hot. So hot that hundreds of writers with websites have blogs. Many of these websites are nothing more than a blog, and others link to their blogs which are elsewhere on the site. Chances are, if you’re a writer, you either have a blog or have considered creating one. Either way you’ll find that Lorelle Van Fossen is an expert blogger who can help anyone wanting to blog.

Lorelle Van Fossen’s new book, Blogging Tips, is sub-titled: ‘What bloggers won’t tell you about blogging.’ Though I’ve been blogging for nearly six years, I learned more than a few hot tips from Blogging Tips and recommend it for anyone who wants to spend a lot of future time blogging.

The book is comprehensive. It attempts to cover all aspects of blogging including the blogging lifestyle, blog structure, content development, community building, search engine optimization, and blog maintenance. There’s even a short section at the end explaining legal issues that may affect bloggers.

Now that I’ve read through the entire book I plan to keep it nearby as I’ll surely want to refer to it from time to time during my career as a blogger. I’m planning to re-read a few sections this week. With as many blogs as I’m handling at this point, I’m sure to have an unlimited amount of upgrading and improvements to take care of. Blogging Tips is a handy reference guide that will stay with me for years.

One of the vital challenges of blogging for me at this time is to have a plan for each blog. Blogging Tips covers this topic in the chapter on ‘Building Blog Content’. It inspired me to sit down and write a precise game plan for the time I spend working on my blogs. Now instead of thinking, “I need to figure out which blog to upgrade next,” I go straight to my new blogging work calendar and figure out which blog to work on and what kind of post to write there. No wasted time, thinking about how vast the blogging field is.

Each blog, including a blog about writing, needs a specific purpose — a niche with clear parameters in which the blogger promises to operate to cater to a specific set of readers who are looking for that type of content. A publication schedule helps. My new publication schedule is different for each blog I own.

Lorelle Van Fossen, the author of Blogging Tips, can be found on her blog, Lorelle on WordPress. That’s where I found out about her new book, Blogging Tips, and where you can go to buy it too.

Al Capone Does My Shirts was chosen as a Newbery Honor Book in 2005, and also won many other awards. The author, Gennifer Choldenko, was especially pleased to win the Schneider Family Book Award which honors “a book that embodies an artistic expression of the disability experience for child and adolescent audiences” according to the website of the American Library Association.

Written for children, but loved by adults as well, this novel is set in one of the oddest and most fascinating places in the world: Alcatraz, the island home of what used to be a maximum security prison from 1934 to 1963. At that time, prisoners were not the only ones living on Alcatraz. When the story takes place, in the late 1930’s, many prison guards and other employees lived in apartments there with their families. The warden had a house.

In Choldenko’s novel, Moose, age 12, is forced to move to Alcatraz by his parents, but has a hard time adjusting to life away from his best friend in Santa Monica. There are other children on the island, but none he connects with right away. The warden’s daughter, Piper, is a trouble maker he tries to ignore, unsuccessfully. When Moose goes to school in San Francisco and meets Scout, he has a chance to play baseball with other boys. Then his mother ruins his fun by insisting that he go home from school immediately after school every day to take care of his older sister, Natalie, who is autistic.

Choldenko chose an unusual and exciting location for the novel, and it plays as important a role as any of her characters. According to an interview posted on her website, she got the idea for the novel from a newspaper article, then volunteered as a docent on Alcatraz to do her research. At the end of the novel she includes a few pages about Alcatraz history, noting what was historically accurate in her novel, and what parts were pure fiction.

Another element of the novel that contributed to its success was Natalie’s character - an autistic teenage girl who doubled as a human calculator while being totally out of touch with any part of reality other than her button collection and numbers. This character, while being wholly fictional, was based on Choldenko’s observation of her own older autistic sister. Moose’s predicament gives a voice to anyone who has been a caretaker of an autistic relative.

The novel’s bright red cover and a photograph of Alcatraz are essential to the appeal of the book. Now that it has a shiny silver Newbery Honor Book sticker as well, Al Capone Does My Shirts is sure to attract attention for years to come.

I recently finished reading Travels With Charley by John Steinbeck. Though I’d read many of his novels and short stories, this was the first time I’d read any non-fiction by him, and I was pleasantly impressed with his humor and easy-to-read, friendly writing style.

Travels With Charley is a travelog. He wrote it after taking a three-month cross-country trip in 1960. He and his black poodle, Charley, toured the United States in a truck with a camper built onto it. Steinbeck couldn’t see everything but he wrote about his experiences in Maine, Illinois, Wisconsin, Minnesota, South Dakota, Montana, Oregon, California, Texas, Louisiana, and his home state, New York.

Although he took the trip to reconnect with common Americans, he spent a lot of time writing about his dog, Charley. I loved reading about his trials with the dog because I’ve got one of my own.

Steinbeck concealed his true identity from most people he met along the way so they would act naturally around him. By then he was a famous author; this was his last book. He felt out of touch with the people he was famous for writing about, and believed this was the way to revitalize his outlook on American life.

Along the way he met Canadian farm workers, motel owners, some old friends in Monterey County, California, rich Texans, and many others. He had a bit to say about politics, and provided heartfelt comments about racial unrest in the deep south. While waiting to connect with his wife who flew to Chicago to spend a few days with him, he unraveled the mystery life of a former hotel guest by examining clues left in an upscale hotel room he’d been given access to. And he spared the lives of two coyotes in the Mojave Desert.

I’m glad I took the time to read Steinbeck’s last book. I can never get enough of his writing.